Poor phrasing in the welcome email

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Poor phrasing in the welcome email

Postby syntaxis » 2004-09-15 14:31

At the moment, the word "Forums" is unnecessarily duplicated in both the subject line and message body of the welcome email, like so:
Welcome to Unofficial User Forums Forums

One instance of the word should be trimmed. And while we're at it, I think a "the" should be put in there, too, so the amended version would be something along the lines of
Welcome to the Unofficial User Forums

Lol - and if you were feeling especially adventurous, you could even toss in an exclamation mark at the end of the sentence for a bit of added "oomph".

What d'you reckon?
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